Kart-Man's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Particles]

Equation: Blue ball + Gravity-inflicted balls = ?

Answer: Fun. Playing with balls is fun. :P
Anyway, I found no glitches, and avoiding the red balls is challenging (especially if there's eight bouncing all over the place). Great work!

[Ghost Chase Game 2]

Ghost Game Chase 2 is not frightening to play.

Lame pun aside, this game is not that bad. I like how ghosts randomly spawn from the sides, and the music is somewhat fitting (Super Mario World, right?). The graphics could be better though, and sometimes I hit a ghost and lose a life when I could've sworn I wasn't touching it at all.

kl-harry responds:

Yeah, I'm working on that glitch: it seems there might be 'invisible' ghosts. keep playing!

[giant game tutorial]

"giant" game tutorial is so fat, it sinks.

Yeah, yeah, yeah. So you think you're smart, eh? You're so smart, you made a tutorial with 8 subjects (not that "giant"), and you DIDN'T EXPLAIN ANY OF THE CODE! If a renowned Flash artist like Glaiel-Gamer posted and said, "This is an open-source dump", I suggest you pay attention. I also recommend that you improve your graphics. Sheesh!

Graphics - 1 - I suggest you move away from badly-drawn blobs and stickmen.

Style - 0 - You have none.

Sound - 2 - See 'Style'.

Violence - 0 - I should probably change that to 10. This tutorial was so bad, it made my eyes bleed.

Interactivity - 1 - Buttons.

Overall - 0 - This did not take any effort whatsoever. Come back with a game, and maybe I'll be more impressed. :)

[pico shool tutorial pt 1]

Horrible.

Please, don't even bother.
Graphics - 1 - At least there is a splattered blob that resembles Pico. Meh.
Style - 0 - None whatsoever. From what this tutorial shows me, it shows me that Tom Fulp could make a better Flash game than you using Flash 3. FLASH 3. Jesus Christ!
Sound - 0 - Blatant.
Violence - 0 - Pico has a badly drawn gun, but it wasn't even coded to fire bullets and actually kill people with them.
Interactivity - 0 - Tutorials are meant for people to learn from. You could try explaining the code. Which brings me to number 2 -- that code is so simple, even a monkey can remember that. stop();
Humor - 0 - I laughed hard at the fact that you have a fake preloader. Don't even bother remaking Pico's School if you can't even make a real preloader.

Overall - 0 - Blam points, plz.